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My 1st Animation!! by ilex10 My 1st Animation!! by ilex10
awwweee I made my very first flash animation!! :)
Just a small attempt, only took one hour and has 11 frames but still, I feel proud ♥
Now just gotta color it and maybe tweak a few things!
Feel free to let me know what you think ^^
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Hi Hal!
So luckily for you I am an animation expert..
I feel confident enough to say thats kinda close to the truth. ´

Anyways! This looks pretty good for a first attempt.
So lets get the bad things out of the way.

Everything works pretty well, but if something would have to be changed I´d say that the head and the front legs are whats lacking a bit.

Now for the head, you could use a little impact. From what I see there is a little of what im talking about. Basically what you need to do is, after the head hits the point that is the furthest back, you wanna do one more frame, you wanna bring the head a little bit back as well, as a reaction. Just remember what newton said: "For every action there is a reaction", meaning in animation that her head wouldnt just stop.

For then for the front legs. Now this is only valid if what you have done is a run cycle, but none the less, I think it would be good to know. Its not much. The front legs just miss a little bending. I see a little at the end, but for a run cycle the front legs are too stiff.

Now for the positive.
First of all for a first this is very advanced and courages to start out with. One thing I particuraly love about it is the tail. The tail is animated beautifully and it really feels as light and fluffy as it looks.

Great animation Hal, wouldnt mind seeing more from you.
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SolarFoxi Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so cute~
ilex10 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist
thankyou :)
StiahtaManiwasi Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Writer
It's pretty good, especially for your first animation.
ilex10 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist
StiahtaManiwasi Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome.
emmanuelin13 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
"I feel proud ♥" and you should :D, it's amazing
ilex10 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist
thank you :)
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December 27, 2012
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